Sunday, July 8, 2012

Picture & Description for Subsapien Biomech

Bryce (left), Caleb (middle), Pro (right)

Hey, all! This is a picture of three of my main characters I drew along with a description of the book they're from: Subsapien Biomech. I hope you like it. :) I will be posting a sample chapter soon. (Removed it because I've done too many revisions since this post. XD) Thanks for reading. ^ ^

UPDATE: Changed the description to my even newer description. 

The only life seventeen year old Bryce has ever known is as a subsapien grafting, a half human half cheetah creation; a prisoner in the Rota labs; and the guardian of his beloved younger brother, Matt. He’s never met his parents or been to school, only endured whatever unethical experiments the scientists have subjected him to. After his legs are crushed during yet another test, he wakes up in a different lab far away with new mechanical parts—and without Matt. 

Judah Mitchell, the manipulative CEO of the company who owns Bryce, offers him a deal to change his destiny as a lab specimen. He wants Bryce working security in his home with Matt, meaning Bryce will finally leave the abuse of the labs.

The price?  Bryce has to become like the humans who have tortured him. 

With the help of another subsapien named Caleb, he must learn to become the race he’s hated since the first needle prick. He must turn away from the ways of survival and animalistic behavior ingrained in him as a child and become normal. But secretly, he vows to escape the labs all together like he’s always wanted … just as soon as he gets his only remaining family back.

Are humans all bad like the scientists and guards? Will he ever see his little brother again? Can Judah Mitchell even be trusted at all? Is the deal worth giving up Bryce’s identity? 


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13 comments:

  1. Congratulations on your first blog! It's a great experience.

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  2. Hey, Victoria! By the way, homeschool graduates are AWESOME!!!!! *virtual high-fives*

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  3. Hey, Becki. :) I know right? *virtual high-fives you back*

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    1. I also really like the design of your blog. ^_^ It's all bright and sparkly and stuff! :D

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    2. Thanks. ^ ^ I was going for sci-fi-ish. ;)

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  4. Cool art and story idea and blog, Victoria! :-)

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    1. Thank you. ^ ^ Really cool to see you comment. :D

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  5. Great job, Tori! I'm super excited for you, and think this is awesome. You're so going to be a successful published author someday. With your God-given talent and passion, plus your hard-work, you will get there! I love all three of the character's names, especially Pro, and think the drawings are great. They're super professional. I don't read much anime, but I know your stuff looks just as good as theirs. Good stuff! -Natasha

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    1. Thank you, Natasha. ^ ^ That means a lot. Pro's name is short for Promise, since she hates her whole name. ;)

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  6. Ur blog just screams Subsapien! I can't wait to see what else u put on here :D

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